Push to make you move

[blackdogg]

Ever have one of those days when everything is just fucked up
Nothing makes any sense and ya feel like you could just rip someone's head off?
Well ya know what i think today is my day because I am feeling extremely violent

People can come and go with faces i'll never know
I don't care if they stare because it's all an illusion
Mixed up with confusion, abuse, and mutilation
Contemplating my next move but ya already set the trigger off
Motherfucker got some friends that wanna whip my ass?
Then bring it I am so sick of the shit you say I just wanna kill ya today
The only thing that's keeping me from killing you is that I love watching u suffer
You sit in fear as I pass sipping on your drink hoping I won't notice you
I grin to you and you get up and move
I am the push that will make you move
I'm gonna push to make ya move
I'm gonna shove to break through you
I don't need you fucking with me anymore
I 'll admit I love fucking with your head

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

alot of those lines seem to strangely resemble some slipknot lyrics, and oh look, some limp bizkit lyrics.

[blackdogg]

slipknot lyrics and limp bizkit lyrics? no i don't use lyrics in my poems , why would anyone do that? it just be ripping of the song and the artist and i have much more respect for bands than that.

[Funk Doctor]

AFI is right you know.

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

alot of your poem is most conspicuously based around a song called Surfacing by Slipknot. and the rest is based on Break Stuff by Limp Bizkit.

[GodHand Kronix]

I did notice a couple references to Surfacing by Slipknot.