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im at the station waiting,
for the girl who im so happy im dating,
ive taken abig chance,
hoping to guess the arrival time of her train from france,
cos i should be working,
but im sick, so my shift im shirking.

sobefore thoughts of a surprise start sinking,
i gonna write a rhyme while im thinking,
about how much i love, how much i care,
for this angelic little beauty whos kind is so rare.

she is the most special lady in the world i must admit,
a everlasting flame in my heart has been so easily lit.

another train arriving, but still no sign,
of the girl for whom i constantly pine,
shes so small maybe ill miss her,
when all i wanna do is kiss her.

the clocks moved on,
its now a quarter to nine,
and i await inexorably for the lover of mine,

will she come soon,
or has she already left?
i could be here till midnight,
feeling so bereft!

the cold bites at my bones,
without her by my side,
usually im warmed by her love,
that she decides to provide.

half a year has passed so fat underneath her spell,
for the first time in my life, im imaging the sound of a wedding bell,
cos she is like a dream,enchanting and sublime,
i just wish i had a better idea of her arrival time.
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Post by Caro »

Awww... the ending was clever. I bet she loves it when you write stuff for her. Most guys are too static uncreative retarded and mean to do that. :lol:
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