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I respect those that rhyme,
In an effort to steer youth away from crime,
But I grow angry at the fools,
Who glorify drugs and promote guns as tools.

Why is so much music sold by tits and arse?
Artists who rely mainly on visuals, to me lack class.
Too many ‘musicians’ with financial gain as their only aim,
A song isn’t an art-form for them, it’s a money making game.

Its such a crying shame,
That the masses spend their cash on albums so lame,
Cos if you search with more zeal,
You can fin music more real.
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Post by Azim »

hey dan, how often do you write music? you add a new poem every couple of days or so. do you write more whilst not on this site?

keep it up, they're pretty sweet man.
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Post by weedguru_animal »

i write them when i at work playing fishmonger or when i smoking and listening to music, or when i am travelling between places on abus or train or plane whatrver. glad you like em.
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Post by GodHand Kronix »

yea sick rhymes i gota tip, not to act like i know more than u or anything and not to offend you cuz your shit is nice just a tip, if you keep the amount of syllables in each line the same or close to the same it gets a much nicer flow
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yeh the syllable count is sometimes in the back of my mind, i prefer just to write what i feel and hop ei can make it ryme a little. it makes a difference hugely, if i am listening to tunes when i write cos then the poems take on an atural flow that the music gives me.
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Post by GodHand Kronix »

Understood, well keep doin your thing, they're great (Y)
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