for my queen2

[weedguru_animal]

I think of you when I wake,
I think of you when I sleep,
These feelings that I have for you already run so deep.

I wanna hug you tightly,
I want your body next to mine,
But not till the 25th can I do more than write a line.

I miss the way you look at me,
I miss the way you smile,
If I were to say I didn’t care for you immensely,,
Id be living in total denial.

Your presence is something for which I constantly yearn,
Im counting down the days,hours minutes until your return.

Cos It’s so easy for you to fill me with bliss with just one kiss,

To the depths of my emotions,
You have opened a door,
And as your absence grows, I love you more and more.

Love dan

[chachilovesyou]

awh that's nice! GOOD job yay!!
atleast u dont come from the.......united states of whateva! haha!
cool poem dan! lolo shall be very pleased!
peace
xxx
chachi

[herbal stu]

Your 2 poems are pretty deep man but you are such a love sick fool!!
Bit like me really!

[weedguru_animal]

better sick with love than sick with hate as the old weedguru saying goes. yeh i surpassing even my own expectations of feeling for my lady. i was hoping to write lots of rhymes about other stuff while she was away from me for 10 days but so far i have only been able to write about her!i love the way my heart and mind can be focused on one person so much. its true that absence makes the heart grow fonder!!hope even though you might find the peoms abit soppy, that you like em!!cheers for the reply.
peace and happiness to all our readers
animal

[Caro]

she's a lucky lady, coz it's a rare man who is sensitive enough to write poetry for her...the closest thing I ever got from my man was "I love you forever, Cari-Jo, and I will stay by your side till we die. Take care of the cats really good". And that little bit made me cry with happiness and I laminated it and carry it around with me everywhere

[gilbert montagné]

awwh caro thats so emoving, bravo