Eternal Abyss

[dE3d]

From the eteral abyss
a shadow on the mind.
The plauge of bliss.
It has no form
nor color.
Grabs and deforms
realities bounds.
A hollowed man wails.
It surrounds
and drags
deeper and deeper.
Yells but gags.
Light appears.
He is free.
but cant cohere,
from the eternal abyss.

-dE3d

[Ikku]

Interesting and nice diction. Not really sure what it's about? Bliss is a plague that drowns a man? Do you mean perhaps that the idea of bliss and perfect happiness is some unattainable myth that we keep struggling for and that eventually we can be free from it? My interpretation anyway, putting kind of a Buddhist spin on it.

[omnific.dc]

Mate, I've been there..death..but you're right I'm back, call it free if you will..

Buddhism doesn't exist in Australia..a lost vertue, lost icon..filled with athiests..getting dumber and dumber..it's sad.

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

Really? I'd expect intelligence to be on the rise with a decrease in religious idiots.

[weedguru_animal]

The New Dumb aren't that different to the religious fanatics, in fact they often seem worse to me, for at least there is a hint of magic, fantasy, preternatural lunacy in most religious enterprises, whereas the New Dumb worship not gods and goddesses and ideas of heaven and hades, but purely inorganic, lifeless objects, like cars, like clothes, like sunglasses. Its a church of a very different kind, yet still completely founded upon the brainwashing of the majority. Superficiality, vanity, a steady focus upon aesthetics, with intelligence more and more widely seen as something to laugh at, as with heart and spirit, more laughable traits...strange times, eh, Fire.

[Weedguru_RyaNayR]

Right on the Head of the Nail, Dan.