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3 short poems...

Post by Weedguru_Falkon »

Two are untitled, the last is Black Acres.. Keep in mind i wrote these a few years ago. i think i was depressed when i wrote them :?

1.
When we die...
Where do we go?
To lands unknown?
To lands at heart?
When we cry...
Would you be the half of my whole?
in lands distant
or would you be the demise of my soul?
When we smile
What hath your heart?
In places obscure
an end? a start?
When you die
Would you be my martyr?
in spaces gloomy
Could you be my starter?

2.
In that land far away
Where i've been left,
could you be my martyr?
My starter, my answer?
or is it possible that you're my abuser
the one who benefits when you fuck her
When i'm deceased
Would you care the least?
In this land of the living,
Why are you so unforgiving?
To you it's no matter
when i climb the ladder
between heaven or hell
an eternal life or a new sick spell
the "journey of life" you say
It moves, it sways
Even at the slightest moment
a cruel, long judgment will wait, devouring
those cowering
to deaths lament
to your poisons content.
(That one kinda doesnt make sense.. some parts of it are ok.. but yeah,)

3. Black Acres
The park of Black Acres,
of makers, of takers
lays in the recess
Stays at rest, at rest
until the awakening
the spooking, the freaking
takes the takers, the makers,
The trees hear not their cry,
Their sigh, their sigh
the water hears not their plight
their fight, their might
The black clouds hear not their depsair
Their nightmares, their frightmares
only can I hear their hapless bind, for they are crying, crying, crying in my
m-i-n-d
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Post by BlazedAndConfused »

woah
the second and third one are good. the first one really hits home tho. makes me think.
until my head explodes
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Post by Weedguru_Falkon »

Yeah.. now that im reading those while high... They seem way fucking good.. not bragging or anything, but i didnt know i could write like that...
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Post by Liles »

Nice, I'd love to post some of my own, but they're pretty embarrassing
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Post by doobieman420 »

nonesense, if they need work we can help u. good shit btw, nice flow.
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Post by Weedguru_Falkon »

Thanks. Another one...

The road goes through a deep path,
hidden.
The picture is unreal in words,
does that make it forbidden?
This is a quest through the psyche
Does it come to a rest?
Is this the true me?
Nearly nostalgia,
the path empty except I
Alone trodding... What might i unlock?
Worlds lie down the paths.
What could this signify?
My true energy.

and another..

Swept aside into the air
Did they know, did they care?
Surrender, float lightly, wander
Indeed, ponder
Do they see the hues?
Interesting views.
Light up the night?
or darken the light
no matter the quest...
Theyre at rest.
The energy of souls,
the spirits of wholes
Fly not into the dark
for the spark
of light
can and will provide might

...again
Restlessly waiting,
hopelessly debating.
The stars above,
could they mean love?
Or could they mean hate
and begin to desecrate
that which ive anticipated,
the complicated?
Provide me with an answer,
oh ancient master
of light in the skies,
the power of cries
is on your side,
what could you guide?
my existence is simplicity,
yours, complexity.
In The fading dark,
should we wake with a mark?
Less judgmentalism,
less racism?
How could we survive
with such a hunger to drive
those who are different
out with content?
With the stars aligning,
this could be OUR timing.
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Post by WeedGuru_Flow »

The second one is awesome man (in your second 'batch' of poems)

keep it up, love reading mind boggling stuff :p
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