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emotionally lame

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i'm 27,
living a life thats lacking,
the only horse in the paddock,
that nobodys backing.
because i'm not equipped to win the race,
to play their game,
i'm mentally omnipotent,
but emotionally lame...

I'm in another slump,
growing increasingly disorientated,
My shell has weakened,
leaving uncovered a part of my Self that for years has been hated...
the side of Me which shows that my carefully constructed image is tragically over-rated..
cos im no Saint..
i'm more the fucking sinner..
I could lie and say i've just started been bad,
but in truth i'm no beginner....
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Post by danno_rollin_blunts »

thats crazy nice
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Post by Dr. Greenthumb »

that's some hard hitting stuff...good work animal
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Post by weedguru_animal »

Cheers people. One of my rawest personal rhymes of late. I seem to have a real talent for expressing my flaws in life. A talent or an attempt at absolution, but i thatcase who is the priest??you as the reader?....No, moreover i think that I am looking for likeminded people...
thanks again for the comments..
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You guys are making me wanna quite the prose/reportage(carlos valdez news entries) and get back into the rhythm of rhymes!
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