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Heart and the mind

Going about your business with your heart on your sleeve,
Is a way of life in which I truly worship and believe.
And I wish there more like this who I could follow
Cos life is precious and shouldn’t ever be hollow.

The most powerful organ in our bodies box of tools,
Is the heart that can turn kings into fools,
Where love and hate are created and destroyed,
Emotions only the strong-minded can withstand or avoid.
The other important organ is the creative mind,
Where always the most activity in a body you can find

Mental processes and inquisition,
The thought creator for our life-mission.
The part us responsible for every cloudy vision,
Something affecting each and every decision.
Could be a description of the mind or the heart,
Cos for some, emotions play the biggest part.
Balance between the two is constantly sought,
Controlled emotions to match clarity of thought.
What must also be considered is the amount of passion,
A raw and powerful follower of a different fashion.
Which can add fuel to a burning fire,
And fan the flames even higher.

The capacity we have for feeling is immense,
But in todays world people seem more concerned about paying their rents,
The mind worrying more than the heart can feel,
Or the main preoccupation been to find the next meal,
The world is a complicated place,
But we can all delve into our base,
Cos we all need to know who we really are,
From the truth about oneself many people are far.
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that's pretty good man, after reading through your poems I have picked up that in most of them you sound like you really hate that people think more about money and greed than live there lives happy, thats good that you dont follow down that path. Keep working on them, your soul one was pretty good too, but doesn't beat this one.
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awesome man!
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i dont hate them mate, i just dont like the system w elive in whereby life is more about earning moiney and consuming that exchanging energy between people. it might sound corny, but just the way i think, i done a little travelling round the world andmy eyes are open to different methods of living and i honestly feel that the happiest(and this th emost important thing to me)people were a family i met in the hill s of nepal who had noithing materially , but everything between them. all of them were content.
i was trying to do afew about heart soul mind, cos me and my mate had a huge argument about religion. i made it even worse when i told him i didnt have ne set belief, even though i was christened a roman catholic. so my plan was to doa few bout how i think life should be lived. diffuclt to try and seperate between heart, soul, mind, also wanna do one about will power cos i got a very strong mind, but a shoickingly weak will, but that may be due to the skunk. unsure.
anyway its cool to have someone kinda following my work. i think my favrite ones i have done are the 'born out of love or hate' the nature one, ambitions and ''i like'
i duna 'i love' similar but needsx more work, maybe i put on tonoght neway!
keep reading, toking and living life wwith your heart on your sleeve and your third eye open, azim.
stay cool
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dan
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sorry if it sounded like i said ya hated them, i shoulda worded it better, i said "you sound like you really hate that people think more about money and greed than live there lives happy" sorry if it sounded like i was rippin on you before. peace, gonna get some weed in a few minutes so it should be all good. :spliff:
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it cool azim. i grateful to anyone who gives me any feedback on what i write. stay cool
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Post by ktmh »

gday weedguru_animal (dan) *shrug*

i'd just love to let you know that your poems really speak to me.
reading them (or most of them) really opens my eyes about different things and also just the way you word you thoughts so beautifully really intrigues me and never fails to put a smile on my face.

kt

p.s. i know it's pretty cheesy but jus' couldn't help but let ya know
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kt, thanks once again. just as i have got up and seen you have liked my poems, i gunna go smoke a little j, sit in the sun in my garden and write another. unfortunately the theme seems currently to be my lack of a woman, but still just gotta write what i feel whether postive or negative i suppose. it honestly makes me feel wicked to think some poeple actually ENJOY what i write. i an emotive person and poems a wicked medium for expressing how i feel. cheers again, have a cool day kt, and hope that australia is still wicked, co si wanna come home soon!!
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