i got an idea

[weedguru_animal]

I got an idea

It aint safe these days,
Walking out at night,
People got so much,
But they still wanna fight….

Theres a war going on,
I can hear the sirens ringing,
During dark and light,
Heathens are bringning,
Evil to the streets,
To the earth and the air,
We all live in the same world,
But these fuckers don’t care,
If their amusement is another mans nightmare…


They don’t want your money,
They don’t want your clothes,
They just wanna take turns,
To see who can lay the hardest blows,

A guy was stabbed,
A few weeks ago,
For been friendly in the monring, and saying hello,
To a stranger,
Without considering the danger…
But now he’s dead,
Cos he bumped into a man with the devil in his head…
Who killed wihout reason,
Without thought nor remorse…
A man who must be driven by a truly evil force…

But this shit is common,
It happens all the time,
There just arent enough police,
To deal with the crime,,



so I was thinking,
About a way to stop ths ship sinking,
And I came up with this idea,
Of forming a group to try alleviate some of the fear…

If we were in numbers,
United by our displeasure,
At those who see breaking an old mans nose as leisure…….

We coould go out after nightfall on patrol,
Maybe reclaim some of the peace of mind that already they’ve stole.
Try put a few wrongs to right,
just for an hour every evening, make it safe to walk the streets at night…

Like a fight club,
With the rage Funneled into a constructive direction;
Right towards the source of the worst social infection….

[cutthecashflow]

It's amazing how many people just quit caring about common courtesy and the common man. What ever happend to help your brother in time of need because he will help you in your time of need. It seems that people nowdays just like treading on everyones toes. And the world is just a sickining place to live in this day and age.

Strong poem you got here.

[chagamuffins]

dude u are great..... i hope this isnt a day job, and never ever stop writing u bring the points that some people have neglected.

[Zen]

Yeah man, that was great. Indeed strong and sturdy and reaking of emotion. SYmpathy to the common man, and spite towards the devil's wannabes. Not a bad idea at all by the way.

Courtesy and Freedom and Justice must be restored to this bleeding and moaning planet.

Peace~

[danno_rollin_blunts]

that poem makes me think of chavs!! i believe that chavs should be ground up rolled up an put in blunts.....watch em burn

[mr green]

LOL@danno/"brady" hehehe joking mate,yeah animal that poem was very thought provoking your right though man,all civilised people seem to have been killed by these cunts(can i say that?)

[danno_rollin_blunts]

yeah for some reason in our day and age the chavs that can be found in most town centers and parks on a regular basis seem to think that they run things. how can this be true when most of them cant even run their own brains. its funny when they speak about weed though......"im gonna get a spliff for friday night" lol what bellends!!!!!!!!!!1

[weedguru_animal]

I just re-read this one for the first time since I wrote the fucker. It reminds me that decidedly dark area of british society. the chavs are a plague, a horribly malignant bi-product of the capitalist system employed by every government since the industrial revolution. Maybe I should or could do some writing to explain the link more easily.....Or just another rhyme.It has been a while now since I composed anything musical sounding in nature or delivery......

thanks, for the comments and encouragment to produce more which comes from the praise.....

[mr green]

man you really have to live in england to get the whole hog of em....

keep em coming animal

[stoner_pacman]

I seriously thought I was one of few that believed we could make a difference, it sounds far fetched to say it and people might flame me but fuck it.......why dont we start something, some sort of fucking alliance, if the "devils wannabes" thought there were going to be reactions to their actions, then maybe they would think twice, it would start small ofcourse, but everything does, tesco started off as a valleys fruit and veg store and im sure wallmart started the same way but look at them now, If you plant the seed, the plant will grow, the same applies here, seriously, we should start something, just somebody that the cunts need to answer to if they fuck with us, imagine the shock if they beat someone up and the next day a load of people turned up and scared the shit out of them for it, you wouldnt even have to be violent i dont think, I mean, imagine 15,20 or even more people approaching you because you hit some kid and threatening you, would you do it again? seriously , we are too laid back we should make a stand , animals poem could be the message and we could be the messengers, canada, america, uk all of us everywhere, known as the same group of people. they wouldnt fuck.
on our own we are noting but together...who knows whats possible.

PEACE OUT

[FIRE!!!]

'We could go out after nightfall on patrol,
Maybe reclaim some of the peace of mind that already they’ve stole.'

This line was one of my favorites in the poem,

anyways it's awesome work animal, just what I expected to come from your introspective mind, and it's a good idea, but sadly this type of thing can be very hard to organize sometimes..

[weedguru_animal]

'animals poem could be the message and we could be the messengers,'
lovely line......my ego hasn't been caressed in that way for some time....But the reality of the situation is somewhat more disconcrting i.e. the amount of people who can relate to what I wrote confirms that the problems are widespread...

I haven't been giving my rhymes much time or attention this year, as I have concentrated on the Carlos Valdez news reports, but seeing this thread makes me think that perhaps I am more effective and interesting when writing rhyming verse...

More important than the extremely welcomed praise, is the suggestion by some of you to follow through on the ideas very loosely laid out in the poem. That is something which gives me great hope.

I speak too often to shallow minded fools about the need for not only change of government, but change of whole society, change of the laws and the way we enforce them...I am only just begining to understand that many people are so mentally flaccis that they can't comprehend anything other than their own way of live...and refuse to consider anything that is more than three inches from their noses....

The mafia offers a better way than the capitalist police systems. I would be happy to pay my taxes to la famiglia, instead of the government, safe in the knowledge that if anyone fucked with me or anyone in my area, then they would be dealt with. That fear of everyone knowing that crime will be punished, often fatally, is a massive detterent to would-be scum.

The pathetic police forces are not equal to the size of the criminal forces. until they are equalled out, and also the judicial/sentencing system is changed, the shockingly low conviction rate for criminals, in the UK especially, will serve as an incentive to commit crime....the chances of getting caught and prosecuted are becoming minscule...the government has gradually sold of all of it's obligations to the people : gas, electricity, transport, some security jobs, hospitals....It seems that the government also are quickly losing any semblance of responsibility to maintain law and order...Tony blair and his cronies are a bunch of powerhungry liars, cheats and fraudsters....Any government that opens up education, health, water, electricity, services to the competitive free-market is not putting the provision of the basics needed for survival at the front of their thinking, then essential services become a essential product.....
too much as usual....I will leave it there and maybe get a few rhymes pumped out tonight before the footballl.....
stay safe people..