lost my way

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lost my way

Post by weedguru_animal »

i've lost my way,
made 2 many mistakes,
now i have 2pay,
only 26,
but already going grey.

from the seeds that were sewn,
weeds have replaced the beautiful flowers that had grown,
and all i feel now is ALONE.

theres no wind in my sails,
every attempt at optimism fails,
the coin landed on heads,
but i'd bet all i own on tails.......
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Post by Scratch »

Good one
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Post by angel'sdrug »

deep
weed is great but open your mind to everything
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Post by Zen »

I really liked the last verse there Animal, reminds me of Pink Floyd's song Time "And then one day you'll find, 10 years have got behind you. No one told you when to run, you missed the starting gun *starts to sing away*

I know it's not the same message but it still reminds me of that song hehe

peace
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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