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Mind Terrorist
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what i had before

Post by Mind Terrorist »

there's no point in looking back
memories of what used to be
destroyed by emotional torment,
the end of you and me
but i'll remember..

i can smell you
i can taste you
but i can't touch you
you're not mine anymore,
you've walked on through that door
left me wanting more
we could of sorted this before
when i was flat out on the floor
do you remember...

it's never been what anyone wants
it's always been what everyone's got
it's something nobody can change,
opposites attract but we were the same.

what i had before
i left wanting more
there is no back door;
i've got to live this one out
may hurt me to shout
photographs which i tore
memories kept in store...

(that was a song i wrote when i split up with my ex-ex girlfriend, it fucked me up a lot but here is basically how i felt).
~iNDiViDUALiTY iS A GiFT~
we all die one day,
remember that when i go first...
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Post by Caro »

I could tell it was a song, a good song. Had a lot of those feelings too about an ex. +
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Post by Zen »

Writings are always the best when they're written with the heaert and not the hand. I could feel the emotion pourin out of the monitor as I read through your song MT. I too felt.. still do sometimes, about an ex of mine.

peace
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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