along came this prick

Post by **weedguru_animal** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 11:57 am

i was having a good day,
till along came this prick,

who thought cos he wore a suit,
that i should suck his dick.

i had been in such an amazing mood,
ill this fool decided to be so damn rude,
he'd never spoken to me before,
but hatred in his eyes i clearly saw.
a hatred based on my inability to conform,
in his mind he created a mini thunder storm.

what is it about short hair and a suit,
that incites in a soul the manners of a brute?
this fuckwit cant of thought before he spoke,
but it was obvious from the ugly look on his face that this was no joke.

perhaps a shame that i was in the clouds,
the skunk in my mind lifting me above the crowds,
cos if i'd been straight when hed spoken to me that way,
i would have had something more angry and aggresive to say,
like,'who the fuck are you?
telling me what to do?
why you giving me this stress.
who you trying to impress?
or are you simply a nasty man,
if so, fuck off ,go away from this fishmonger called dan.

with no introduction he assumed respect was due,
even though to my environment his presence is new.
when i see a shirt and tie,
should i listen then comply??

a modern litle hitler, so con-de-fucking-sending,
left me by saying my punishmen was pending,
but im losing no sleep,
over this annoying litle creep,
cos wihout a uniform, he is but a sheep,
told to follow,
and also probably when to swallow.

Owen · Post by **Owen** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 12:31 pm

man ur good at writing poems

weedguru tom · Post by **weedguru tom** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 2:19 pm

flynn · Post by **flynn** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 3:31 pm

Caro · Post by **Caro** » Thu Apr 08, 2004 5:18 pm

I liked how you came back to the theme in the end

Post by **weedguru_animal** » Fri Apr 09, 2004 1:25 pm

hey you people,cheers loads for the comments as ever.i find it so asy to write when someone really pisses me off and harder to write when i am quit calm. funny that really.i guess i need passion and my poems are my therapy??anyway hope all is good for you 3 and thanks again for taking time to comment.have a cool day
animal

tankooo1 · Post by **tankooo1** » Tue May 11, 2004 6:35 am

another great poem

Ev3rydaySmok3r · Post by **Ev3rydaySmok3r** » Mon Jun 07, 2004 9:41 am

that is a really great poem

Post by **weedguru_animal** » Fri Jun 18, 2004 4:15 pm

funny thing is, the guy in question has completely changed his attitude towards me since the incident which incited the poem. He actually seems like underneath the dickish attitude that he has been taught to express, perhaps hes a decent guy. Though if he saw the poem, i doubt that he would enjoy it!!
animal

Weedguru Sensei · Post by **Weedguru Sensei** » Fri Jun 18, 2004 4:21 pm

That's great - I love it.

Post by **weedguru_animal** » Fri Jun 18, 2004 4:33 pm

hey sensei i just put another poem on.Its a bit downbeat you could say but tell me what you think, its called angels tear.cheers
animal

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