check it my peom

[smoker jonjon]

at the age of five, ignorance is bliss
then i'm 13 and all i do is kiss
turned 16 and i started to do dope
did it so much i started to lose hope
like a rope, it burns till i fall
take it away before i lose it all
if you know what you are doing, then have fun
before you know, it takes you, thats it,
your done
whisky and weed, is all i need
or at least i thought, till i started to bleed
no blood what shed, but my face was wet
tears of not of joy, not those of a little boy
anger, pain, and torture
it drags you, it carrys you
till your a bloody mess
a person in full distress
money, comes so slow, yet it goes so fast
joints, blunts, they come in the mass
enjoyed, ever so slowly
this is what the demon carrys, it isnt holy
in some ways... it is good...
but after this... would.... you?

[weedguru_animal]

yo smokerjonjon, liking your poem a lot geez. good to see some members writing some serious shit as well as funny stuff. keep em coming mate.
peace
animal

[pimpinganitdead]

i was felling for something to cure my mind tehn i took a look behide then i started to un wind then i had to grind so fuck all the *censor*

[Weedguru Higher]

Damn, that was good! Real good! And true.