mutton dressed as lamb

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mutton dressed as lamb

Post by weedguru_animal »

your'e Mutton dressed as lamb,
Ur picture of beauty is contrived,
Its s sham,
You act like cured proscuito,
But really you are processed spam….
My mind moves like a jet,
And yours is struggling to keep up with a tram…
Without the makeup + designer shades you feel ugly?
Fuk your sob story,
Cos for people as shallow as you,
I really don’t give a dam…..
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Post by Zen »

I've seen better work from you, but the message is still very clear, and especially made so in the last two lines.

Peace~
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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Post by weedguru_animal »

:D lol, cheers for taking time to comment on all the ryhmes mate.

happy christmas to all the poets or rhymers or writers,.....
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Zen wrote:I've seen better work from you, but the message is still very clear, and especially made so in the last two lines. Peace~
yeah...dud thanks for such info. :applause:
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