A poem that isnt really stonerish

pothead_jaime · Post by **pothead_jaime** » Tue Jul 15, 2003 11:03 pm

Arise from disturbed slumber,
Woken by the sound of thunder,
In him is tomorrow today,
And when in end is hell to pay,
And seen in distance is the truth,
Interlocked with age and youth,
Slowly begin the journey to everlast,
When all of time can finally surpassed,
To live by the law or decide by the heart,
Is a choice that by all is set apart.

Thats my story... with hidin meaning lol.

asherz · Post by **asherz** » Tue Jul 15, 2003 11:07 pm

It's deep.

I love it .

pothead_jaime · Post by **pothead_jaime** » Tue Jul 15, 2003 11:10 pm

Thanks i just thought of it yesterday... its a bout a boy with a troubled childhood whos beaten and the fact that society just sees him as a trouble maker... but in the end all we want is to go to whatever god we believe in.

ginger chain · Post by **ginger chain** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 3:40 am

and what if we dont believe in a god at all?

pothead_jaime · Post by **pothead_jaime** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 3:42 am

well i do and i know a lot of people believe in some sort of god.. but for the most part whether u believe in god or not a lot of people believe that there is some place to look forward to... but because i am catholic and do believe in jesus christ i wrote it to my religion and those that believe in a god or a greater place

ginger chain · Post by **ginger chain** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 3:45 am

pothead_jaime wrote:well i do and i know a lot of people believe in some sort of god.. but for the most part whether u believe in god or not a lot of people believe that there is some place to look forward to... but because i am catholic and do believe in jesus christ i wrote it to my religion and those that believe in a god or a greater place

ok i respect that.. yeah it sounds like you thought about that poem too. (<-- thats a compliment haha)

Caro · Post by **Caro** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 7:53 am

It's pretty good except "surpast" isn't a word lol.

pothead_jaime · Post by **pothead_jaime** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 8:57 pm

o but it is a word... if i could just spell it right.... maybe its two words and not one... god damn it!

blazed · Post by **blazed** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 9:11 pm

surpassed is a word... but i dunno if thats the word you want

pothead_jaime · Post by **pothead_jaime** » Wed Jul 16, 2003 9:18 pm

yes that would be the one... thank you lol. if only i could spell and pronounce things properly...

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