laurene

[weedguru_animal]

it was more than 2 years ago,
when on my knees, i said a little prayer,
asking some uncofirmed divine force,
to send me as girl with who i could share,
the mad amount of love and devotion that i bear..

i asked for an angel,
with latin looks,
a lady with the kinda perfection that you could only find in the most corny of romantic books.

and a month later,
i met laurene,
i looked at her eyes,
and was compelled to embark upon a mission to make her my queeen.
cos she warmed my heart with a glance,
and filled my mind with lustful thoughts disgracefully unclean....

i wrote her a poem,
she liked, so i wrote another,
then fasttracked her like rossi's yamaha,
to become my adorable lover,
and now i sit here thinking that she might make an wicked wife,
and also a wonderful mother...

absence makes the heart grow fonder,
or in some cases, seek other women, and go yonder,
lonliness has its positives, i conclude as i sit here and ponder..

the things i now realize,
more and more every day,
its cool to write it down,
but when she arrives in melbourne i will say::

you make my wolrd rotate,
your love is enough to soothe my soul,
even when im faced with hate,
you were, you are, you alwasy will be my dream mate,
i cant fight aginst destiny,
when i know youve been brought to me by fate..

at times ive been guilty of neglect,
caused by my over intropsection,
you stood by my side whil i succumbed,
to a despressing spiritual infection.

i was acting mental,
like my love was avideo available for rental,
for only 2 days at a time,
im so soryy and i wanna mke you understand how much i know i need you,
through this emotional ryhme...

so i finish with this,
a paragraph of words intended o be a literal kisss.....

hey little ladym
i cant wait till you get here,
all this time on my own,
now i see how i feel so clear,
i need you, i want you,
and i long so despreately for alife in which you are always near..

your beauty is umatchable,
in your physical form and soul,
i swear that i desire your love,
cos its so obvious that you make me feel whole...

this isnt my best poem,
and some observers may call it crappy,
but i am so excited and thankful to have an opportunity to spend my life making you happy......

[Weedguru_Dusk]

Ah this made me go 'aww'

I think its good when someone is able to capture emotion within writing.

"a lady with the kinda perfection that you could only find in the most corny of romantic books. " I think that's my favorite line.

[astramasta]

i wish i was s caring and loving as u dude.
i find it too difficult to show all that emotion.
fair play to ya.