im working again

[weedguru_animal]

Im working again.
Its about fucking time;
Soneone paid me to absorb material,
Which combines to form my rhyme…

It’s a shame,
That I’ve had to go back into the fishmonger game,
But I don’t care,
Cos like everyone else in this country,bar the young and the old,
I share;
A need,
To work long hours, to pay for my rent, a war, survival and alittle bit of weed..

i know theres dangers,
in trying to feel the soul of random strangers,
and all they want is fish,
but unfortunately it is my daily wish,
to try connect in some way to see who they really are;
whether their soul burns like the earth's core or shines bright like a star

[supasayer]

this is superlative ...i love the first verse....i feel the same about work.....a privelege to be able to work with people...of course, there's always the struggle to make all the ends meet....i'm lucky...i mean i worked for it, but, being a youth worker....i can really give back and am learning myself from a wealth of experience embodied in my client group....i work in a school doing this job.....in fact on this theme, i'll post one of my work-related poems...or maybe two....I would love your feedback as i would respect your opinion regards my flow and writing style...

wasn't sure about this bit, may have been an error??

like everyone else in this country,bare the young

i really feel what you sayin about wantin to know a strangers soul....as a oyungster i could never understand my pops chattin to all and sundry....now i love to do this....always absorbing material to mwrite with, but it just jhelps my soul blaze brighter to have these connections....evn if at times i shy away from doing so....it's like an adrenaline rush to really connect wioth someone...anyway i'm going on...will post some poems...peace

supaspewer

[weedguru_animal]

hey supasayer,
your words are extremely appreciated. I shall write more in response later as i want write a rhyme about something thats upset me.two similar events that made me sick to the stomach. but this q uick thanks for now.

bare - i heard englsih people say.. everyones gunna be there bar, shit
shud be bar!!!i chane it, you right, yeh. i stoned when iw rite and make errors, i collating ryhmes slowly and gunna dfo some editing.cheers superesayer.
animal