its only when

[weedguru_animal]

Its only when,
I find a scrap a paper,
And pick up a pen,
That I can express,
The way I really feel about the mess,

That I create,
When I meet a girl I think is my dream date,
Pay a bank fine two days too late,
Flutter between embracing love then hate…

There’s no need,
To read,
In between my lines,
Where the star of sinceriity brightly shines,
As I search for reasons why I was born a number 7 into a world fulla 9’s..

Im just a young man,
Called dan,
With a forever changing master plan,

Of where I wanna go,
Of who I wanna be,
Of the parts of life that I consider,
Most important to me…..

[Zen]

Nice rhyme Animal, I liked the line about being born a 7 in a world full of nines. Reminds me of the jimi Hendrix song If 6 Was 9, which coincidentally is a kick ass song just like your poem!

peace

[weedguru_animal]

cheers derekson.hope you having a wicked day...