Drowning

[Zen]

Just to let everyone know, I'm not thinking of committing suicide or anything. This poem is one big dramaticism(is this a word?), which means it's a little blown out of proportion. Enjoy though ^_^
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I just wanna drown
Just to make myself suffer
These feelings that I"ve found
Wrap around me like no others

I wanna see the surface light fade
Sinking to the depths, darker and colder
Dropping to the center of this shade
Keeping to myself, the words I should have told her

Why couldn't I just say,
You're my sun on a cloudy day
Takin all my pain away
That I looove you baby
Wana hold you close to me
Shining with eachother so brightly
Unfortunately

I had to flee the scene
I"m sorry I didn't say sorry
And I didn't mean to be mean
Another chapter in my story
About a life that's lacking love
Lacking signs from up above
So standing on this ledge
I've reached the razor's edge
Just gave myself a shove
Cause I'ld finally had enough


Curled up in this black abyss
I guess I got my fleeting wish
That angels face I'm gonna miss
Cause no one sees angels
When they're sleeping with the fish

[nowhere]

thats pretty good mate. also kinda can relate a bit

[Zen]

thanks nowhere, glad I could touch you in that way

peace

[BUDA]

Dude you say peace alot. I like that

peace