missing

[weedguru_animal]

i got a queen for a lady,
and kings for friends,
i can see that its not on others,
that my happiness depends.


i feel loved by many, but understood by few,
my spanish half brother and italian maestro to name two,

the genius deago who has a problem with drinking,
but also a unique insight into how my mind is thinking.
cos over the last 18 years,
hes seen the tears,
and the passionate outbursts after too many beers,
now he fully comprehends my strengths and my fears.
so much time has passed and our love never sours,
we are different raindrops from the same rain showers.

i must confess,
that 3 years ago i was in a mess,
suffering from the fallout from a nuclear explosion,
the result of a relationship which suffered too much erosion.

i was in need of help, and thats what i found,
in the mind behind the voice with the musical sound.
the nearest ive had to a real life dad,
made me generally stop feelling sad,
maybe he saw from the way i was behaving,
that for a calming influence on my life i was subconsciously craving.

since then we have become more like brothers,
scolded in the same way by our mothers,
sharing ideas,
rejoicing together when the winter cloud clears.

they both posses,
an ability to do more than just guess,
what is going on inside my head,and in the bottom of my heart,
they are 2 fellow aquarians, both wise, caring and smart.
they know my thoughts, my actions,
my favourtie distractions,
i have them and the beautiful lady im always kissing,
but still i fell like something is missing.

i wanna know what,
i need that i havent got,
and where exactly i can find,
the key to producing peace in my mind.

maybe i bask in the light from a different star,
cos from humanity i often feel so far,
so distant, so removed,
was my passport to the earth ever fully approved?

[MaGiCalPlant420]

3 words
long
beautiful
touching

[GodHand Kronix]

Ok, this one was probably your best material ever.

[weedguru_animal]

cheers you two for the response. personally the favourit epoem i have ever written is the 'people' poem, i also love the one i did about communication.anyway i love to hear any feedback about my poems, i really hope that they i do manage to convey some of my emotion through the words that i choose.cheers
animal

[shiryu]

deep

[Weedguru Sensei]

I really enjoyed that, keep em coming dude.

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

You expressed everything i've been feelinf since i was about 7. Fucking Awesome.

[weedguru_animal]

hey fire inside, thanks mate. one of the best responses i ever had from one of my poems on here. i think its fair to say that stoners think along the same lines about certain things. So as I am stoned when I write, my stuff is much easier to understand or relate to by fellow stoners.if that makes sense. thanks again mate neway,happy toking
animal

[Distortion]

We can relate to your poetry, and unlike others, you don't get lost in writing your own problems without making an attempt to reach out and help people understand at the same time of waking them up

[_BlaZe_]

touching, reminds me of my relationship with my brother, kinda used him as a father figure since my dad died