thoughts from the winter

[weedguru_animal]

im down,
across my face lies a perpetual frown
and im fed up with this fucked up town.

why the sigh when i breathe?
what causes this melancholy i percieve?
i gotta take a moment to reflect,
identify my problems then try2correct.

the weather is cold, the sjy is grey,
i seem to do the same things everyday single day.
money comes but instantly goes,
my debts increase weekly to add to my woes,
the queen of my heart so poor and stressed,
just hearing her moan makes me depressed.

i gotta take control,
of my heart , of my mind,
my thought patterns,
re-alligned and refined...

so i put on a cd,
that was compiled by me,
when my soul was feeling a little more free,
less constricted,
less conflicted,
and i open my ears,
allow the music to intercept my fears..

if i think of the world around me as a cage,
my body fills with anger and rage,
so i must turn the page,
write a new chapter in the life and times of dan,
rejoin the path that runs from boy2man,
give in to my thirst to learn.
stop been bothered about how much i earn.

kelly watch the stars,
take me to a place with less cars,
where nature and humanity co-exist together,
ill make a base and stay there forever.

id truly like an existance with the sun as my alarm clock,
where no-one cared if the left didnt match the right sock.
self conscious?im a step beyond,
from the english i must abscond,
but first,
before i whet my thirst,
i must concentrate on the here and the now,
take some time to admire my queen and take a bow,
cos she is the light of my life,
and i hope one day she becomes my wife.

[Caro]

Hey man, that one gave me shivers, especially the last stanza. Life can really be a bitch but it's good to see you still have your love and you're still writing. Hang in there, it will get better for you I'm sure.

[Weedguru_Fire_Inside]

lost for words....... bravo

[weedguru_animal]

hey thanks you two for the praise, dont worry that poem was from ages ago, i found it in my room when i was tyding. we are well into spring now so all is good.thanks for the comments and have a cool day.
animal

[tankooo1]

wow, man. incredible. the 3rd-5th stanzas exemplified my feelings today. outstanding poem.