Shattered Rose

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Shattered Rose

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I SPILLED my HEART! I BLED my SOUL!
And got NOTHING! This is gettin' pretty fuckin' old
It's only temporary to smoke bowl after bowl
I need a fuckin' way to fill this fuckin' hole

I never tried so hard, I did nothing wrong
I never thought I would end up writing this song
I thought I would make it if I just stayed strong
But now shes gone, and I don't know where I belong

Each night I cried a flow of heartless tears
And felt like I should just succumb to my fears
She wouldn't even stop to lend me her ears
And it's only when I'm alone that I wish she was near

I try to smoke away all the fuckin' pain
People tell me "Move on," I say "You're insane"
I'll tell you right now that I'm done playin'
I'm not used to losing at such a brutal game
Last edited by GodHand Kronix on Thu Nov 06, 2003 6:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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went off on a more serious tangent for this one as opposed to the shit i usually write
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whatsup no feedback or nothin?
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Post by teh »

Sorry I generally don't participate on poetry posts!

Other people do though, they just arn't on at the moment :)

Patience is a virtue :P
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teh wrote:Sorry I generally don't participate on poetry posts!

Other people do though, they just arn't on at the moment :)

Patience is a virtue :P
and my least favorite at that
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Damn homie that shit soundz familiar. i wrote one similar to that. i guess we've gone through some of the same shit. except for me it waz a guy. it was a good piece reall good. mad props to you homie.
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