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Posted: **Fri Apr 06, 2007 9:15 pm**

www.youtube.com/watch?v=K-6H9jfXMWM
tell me what you think

Posted: **Sat Apr 07, 2007 6:54 pm**

Heh, not sure most breres on this forum'll 'get' your shit...you want me to drop you some beats for your bars bruv? They sound aight...

Posted: **Sat Apr 07, 2007 10:02 pm**

lol wtf u doin back here djjj128 lol.

Posted: **Sat Apr 07, 2007 10:16 pm**

it was....ok at the best.

Posted: **Sat Apr 07, 2007 11:16 pm**

SpRi7e wrote:it was....ok at the best.

Agreed.

Posted: **Sun Apr 08, 2007 2:20 pm**

Yeah, it was decent, but I'm better

keep practicing bro

Posted: **Sun Apr 08, 2007 6:11 pm**

The sound quality no offence is crap lol

get a better recording method instead of a mobile phone.

Even though your pretty fluent (good). I guess you live by East? Well If you ever get to romford mate, you can come over and i can produce you.

Posted: **Sun Apr 08, 2007 7:46 pm**

cheers guys for all the feedback,actualy im from south london,but iam currently living in birmingham,still have a london accent though lol
i fink im going on recording soon,all my mates do it,im only 15 though and have been doing this for like a month or 2

Posted: **Thu Apr 12, 2007 5:02 pm**

Very little. It's just a string of barely comprehensible words dude. It flows oke, but where's the imagery? Where are the metaphors or word play? Quite frankly man, where's the fucking talent? There is nothing in there that seperates you from any other wannabe. It's not like it was bad, but it didn't seem to mean anything, you know? Lyrics should be from the heart. Mcing/rapping is like poetry with a beat, not just a bunch of words that rhyme meshed together. No offence dude, but it needs more depth.

Posted: **Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:47 pm**

I love your name. Laissez-faire. It's like. Whatever

Posted: **Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:49 pm**

if im to be honest, i think your the worst ''music'' artist ive ever heard. this thread is bullshit. and whats more is it was duplicated in news.

Posted: **Fri Apr 13, 2007 12:23 am**

Yea, sounds familiar. Pretty sure I learned about that in history sometime.

Posted: **Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:29 am**

Egypt
The Past
Millions of Years Ago
1942
New York

(ATHFCMFT)

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what do you thin of my mcin

what do you thin of my mcin

kool