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Breathe in
Puff
Breathe out
Smoky sighs engulf us

Unspoken words question the silence
But time is running short
‘Til the record starts to spin
Trapped in a surreal cycle
Will these questions ever end?

My gaze cast over towards you
Blowing smoke in your direction
What do you want from life now?
What do you make of this?


But for once you have no answers
And you find yourself unsure
It’s unnerving to feel more human
Than you ever have before

But life does not wait
For those to learn their fate
So we must wander on our way
Parting for some time

But soon again we will walk side by side
Share a cigarette and conversation
Discovering what’s in store for the both of us

Further down this smoky path of strange reality
Searching for something better, something more
For life’s greatness is ahead just for us to explore

7.25.2005
"having a conversation with you is like walking through a Salvador Dali painting"
[i] ...and your eyes look like they've seen too much its always some excuse too tired, too obtuse you look so far removed, this time I fear im losing you [/i]
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Post by weedguru_animal »

'But for once you have no answers
And you find yourself unsure
It’s unnerving to feel more human
Than you ever have before '


too true dusk too true!

good work (Y) , keep em coming.. i see you musta fisnihed sorting through some older ryhmes then!

take care
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Post by Weedguru_Dusk »

thanks dan :D

Was just digging on my computer actually. I have about 20 or so poems to type up that I found in my poetry binder last night all the way from summer 2004 so some of those might end up on here too.

I'm slowly working on taking some stanzas I wrote as journals on another site into poems because those have been most of my writings lately.
"having a conversation with you is like walking through a Salvador Dali painting"
[i] ...and your eyes look like they've seen too much its always some excuse too tired, too obtuse you look so far removed, this time I fear im losing you [/i]
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Post by Zen »

Hey Dusk! I really liked this one too! The lines animal quoted were among my favorites as well. And the line of how life doesn't wait for us to find our fate, that wasa perfect rhyme which is far too accurate. Our lives are our fate, and something that you can find will not show itself to you before it's lost, for how can you find something you already have?

Very nice :D

Peace~
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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Post by Weedguru_Dusk »

thanks :D those line are actully my favorite stanza as well. I have to put it to my muse for those poems, ha actually most since spring 2004.

I think though sometimes you can lose/find something that you already have when you don't know you have it.

:D thanks agian hun.
"having a conversation with you is like walking through a Salvador Dali painting"
[i] ...and your eyes look like they've seen too much its always some excuse too tired, too obtuse you look so far removed, this time I fear im losing you [/i]
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Post by Zen »

Yeah, I guess not knowing you have something is another form of losing something, you just don't realize it.

Peace~
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
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