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Zen
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Post by Zen »

A Sight for the Sightless,
Wandering away, and
Meandering towards.

-Does she even know?

Shooting stars into the
Core of my beating Heart,
A thousand times a day.

-She has No idea...

Like wind upon my Skin,
Tantalizing mine Eyes,
Whom reject reflection.

-One must let her know.

Sol approaches apex,
Bathing everyone in,
Her infintite beauty.

-I'm here to tell you...

Buzzing through the forest,
A spec amongst Giants,
And a glimmer of thread.

-I think you and I...

His bullet out of the
Barrel, headed toward
A thought of Paradise

-No...

Lightning and Thunder crash,
Tsunamis on the Shore,
As Night falls to the Earth.

-No...

Tell me what you think of this, and not just if it's good or not ^_^

thanks

peace
Last edited by Zen on Wed Dec 22, 2004 7:38 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Use the Earth to sew...
Use the Water to grow...
Use your hands to pick...
Your fingers to pack...
Use the Fire to burn...
Use the Air to breathe...
AND TOKE THAT SH!T LIKE A MUTHA FUCKIN' CYCLONE!!!

-Derekson
Caro
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Post by Caro »

Interesting format, though it has some grammatical errors.
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