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born out of love or hate

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Born out of love or hate

Something naturally powerful like the roar of lions,
The air is filled with electronically charged ions,
Two bodies combing to create a new life,
Kids experimenting or a loving man and wife.
This is called the moment of conception,
Of which our soul must have some birth recollection.
This Force I can’t begin to try understand,
Are responsible for humans overpopulating the land.

.The male hormone lights the fire, thought becomes the coal,
And its then when a birth occurs of a soul,
When does the mind first start to create thoughts, to think?
Only after we have emerged from the womb and are able to make our first blink?
When an ultrasound shows a blob for all to see,
That life has begun, that entity has already started to be.
The conceptual point gives you a base,
the DNA that determines much of your character and the look of your face.

Some life is created out of an act of hate,
Some life is from too many drinks on a first date,
Either way, it matters, this special time,
To ignore this instance of human creation is a crime.
Nurture, nourishment, experience and every individual gene,
Circumstance, whether your mum sells big issue or is the queen
The emotion is passed straight to the child,
Sometimes this will be love, other times something nasty and wild.

The notion that a rapist’s child will always be bad,
Or that a daughter born out of true love will never go mad
Is plain wrong because so many more factors are in effect,
But emotional state of the creators certainly on the child reflects.

Something from that moment is passed on at this connection of souls,
With bad feeling the mental base is weakened by holes,
But with passion and love, especially when it’s really shared,
The child pops out a touch more emotionally prepared.

I think it matters whether you are born out of love or hate,
As there’s something divine that happens when two people combine to create.
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Post by ktmh »

deep... really deep

what ever ya do.. keep writing.
i love reading your shit, i hope you know your talent as well as i do

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Post by weedguru_animal »

cheer ktmh, again it makes me want to continue writing my rhymes knowing that someone out there can relate to and understand what i am talking. you an ozzie then i take it, me too, i born in melbourne but moved round lots,moving back to melbourne i hope next april.i sincerely thank you for taking time to jot downa couple of lines in recognition of my rhymes!!cheers, hope evrything be going wicked for you.
stay cool
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