Poets I need your help

[cutthecashflow]

Allright heres the situation. Theres this girl and I mean shes not like the other girls I get with. Which mostly consist of drunk college chicks at parties. No this girl does not party. She goes to the gym that I lift at. Its obvious that she likes me you know always catch her staring at me and Following me around.

Well theres only one problem with this I like her to I mean my stomach is flopping upside down every time I see her. I get all of these butterflies and knots in my stomach. Then whenever I try to talk to her My tounge feels like its 40 times larger then normal. And I cant get a word out I sit there like a mute. Ive never had such feelings about a girl before ever. So before she gets disguisted and forgets about me completly I'd like to maybe try and write her some poetry to woo her over. However I am not a poet and do not know where to start. Maybe if anyone has any good poems for this or can get me started on the right track for writing my own It would be very much appreciated. If I could give away some seeds I would but all I can give ya is a thank you.

[weedguru_animal]

hey cut, i have helped amateof mine before with this kinsa THING and it turned out bad cos they knew it hadnt been written by him, the english was too intelluigent!!(hahaha you may laugh after reading most my posts on here, however wen it come to writn of more importance i hve a quality grasp of the english language)/ so i gotta say itsa bad idea, you should just think of some lovely words that you really feel describes her and the way she makes you feel, ie..
your stomach fills with butterflies,
every time you see her goprgeous eyes,... etcetctect
neway just write how you feel and imagine her reading it while you write. i generally have never changed my poems once written especially the ones written for love cos they an indication of the emoption i was feeling at that exact time. neway good luck.
some ladies like poets some think they are strange!
take care
animal

[Caro]

Just remember, it doesn't have to rhyme. Just write what you feel about her!

I once had a crush on the hot electrician who came to fix our heater. I thought he liked me too, he was always looking at me and making little quips. And I couldn't get the nerve to ask him out. So I wrote, "I am sad that the work is through. It was great having something hot to look at". But I was too shy to give it to him. So I asked my little sister to give it to him, which she did. She said afterwards, she saw him laughing and showing the letter to another electrician. To my horror, the work was far from through and he kept coming to my house every day.... I hid because he never called and it was obvious I had made a fool of myself. Just thought I'd share that so the same thing doesn't happen to you. Remember, words dissapate with time, but writing is forever.

[cutthecashflow]

I think I got things taken care of. I think. i went to a party last night got all wasted drank about 14 rolling rocks and met this really cool chick ( not the one I like) but she also lifts at this gym and she said she would talk me up to this girl and get us rolling on the same track. Im kinda nervouse but also pretty excited to see how it goes. But I took animals and caros advice and wrote just a simple letter letting her know how I feel you know for a backup plan and all.

[Caro]

Oooh, bad idea. Well not necessarily, unless the first thing you wanted her to say is "that guy's got the hots for you". Because that's what girls do.

[cutthecashflow]

Whats wrong with that?

[Caro]

I dont know, it would just embarass me.

[cutthecashflow]

even if It wasnt said in front of everyone.

[weedguru_animal]

always a problem for me mate, and im 26 now!alwasy seems kinda easier getting the message that youre interested to a lady without having to dit yourself. However the problem with doing this, is that you immediately expose your crush to at the very least one more person.however, then the ball will be full yin her court, so to speak, i always think the direct route is the best, but its always the hardest,has been in the past for me. you gotta get to a point where you think, fuck it, only live once, only gunnahave these feelings for this life, so gotta at least do my level headed best to follow em, feed off them. i got this theory, that there a kinda destiny sending wicked partners our way, and that if you meet someone who you get onwell with and you get that special feeling, you gotta at least explore the feeling a litytle. in the mad world of thoughts, where i live, i have theorized, at times, that if you reallly have a strong feeling for someone after spending some time iwth them, then that feeling must be mirrored insome way either the same or the opposite.anyway not sure why i brought that up, similar to the asian ying and yang business i guess..anyway good luck either way mate, i always find it encouraging when people find someone who just makes the world seem like a wicked place, and then they put some effort into some old style courting.