angels

[weedguru_animal]

1.
In this world I see so much good and so much bad,
So much to make happy, so much to make me sad,

Science explains a lot, but I need more,
i constantly search for a spiritual law,
written by a source, pure and divine,
with reason for misery, love and sunshine.

So I let my mind wander,
Spark a joint and ponder,
Crazy ideas and crazy thoughts,
Why that I feel that if my skin was inside out, then I would be covered in warts..

2
One of the angels rushed back to heaven,
To make a urgent report on a young man born on February seven,
The lad in question was drowning in self pity,
Yearning for nature but stuck in the city,
By the crippling debts,
And an army of regrets.
Fighting to add weight to the shackles locked around his drowning feet,
An Eskimo living in a world of increasing heat….

This was serious, he had to be quick to tell,
This distressing news to the arch angel Raphael,


‘Our son is in trouble,
He’s in danger of reducing the foundations of his life to rubble,
He’s lacking belief,
In anything but grief’

‘the only positive thing I can say is that he wants to believe,
the soul of this son of earth is possible to retrieve,
but I don’t know what to do,
which Is why I bring this news to you’

4.
Raphael donned his disguise,
(Though you could still see the angel in his eyes),
and descended down till his feet touched the ground,
started seeking his goal like a bloodhound..


when he found him, he whispered into his ear,
‘I am Raphael the archangel, please have no fear,
i've come down to earth,
to speak with you face to face,
I come from heaven,
A truly divine place,
And i'm here to say,
That everything is gunna be okay’

5.
I believed not till he unleashed his wings,
Accompanied by a chorus the angel choir sings,
I looked him in the eye,
And I asked him why?
Is there so much bad, so much distress,
If god could possibly do anything less,
To help fix what he created,
Before the planet is incinerated?

‘I know that you love to get high,
all I ask you is that you try,
to free your mind and let it fly,
cos like most humans, inside you are a special guy’

6.
the feathers began to move,
Raphael left feeling he had done enough to improve,
The turmoil,
That was threatening to spoil,
A soul which had good intentions,
Which deserved to die with many good recollections………

[Caro]

That one made me shivery as well! I liked the way you wrote it in 3rd person and made an archangel, just sharing some encouraging words your savior. There probably are angels helping us all along through life, and whispering these thoughts we think are our own... they don't get enough credit. Anyway, nice piece!

[MarleyBoi]

excellent yo, can tell you worked on that one, keep writin dude i like yas creations

[weedguru_animal]

cheers people as ever. the responses push me on to keep writing. yeh not really the kinda rhyme that flows beautifully more like apoetic story, theres probably a name for it but i a self taught poet so im not too sure about the correct terminology. i call it a storypoem!cheers tho marleyboi and caro,have a cool day
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