Some of my haikus. Please dont laugh at me.

[cutthecashflow]

The sun is slipping
The Autumn days growing short
my morale turns weak


Pot makes me feel good
Why then is it illegal
to smoke the green herb

The sun on my face
the joys that I have mistaked
make me fall to tears

Will we meet again
A kiss from your lips I seek
to rid me of pain

Dark and dreary rain
sucks the life from my spirit
brought back by sunshine

[Funk Doctor]

The 4th one stands out. Goode stuffe.

[Zen]

Not too shabby, cept a Haiku is really supposed to be about nature or the natural world... I myself am guilty of breaking that rule many times, but what the hell it's Poetic License haha.

keep it up bro

peace